Blog # 2 Amazing Places
When the first I came to United states, I was a litle confused,because everything it was new for me, when I go to the store with my friend I didn't understand English very well, It was hard for me, that time when the people talk to me I was smile instead of talk, because I don't know nothing ,and one Day it was christmas Day they took me to dawon town to show me about Jesus birth ,I was so excited to see those image I did read the bible before,and it was exact the some image the way I read it.I wasn't expect to see that image, so I was happy when I see it.
I also went at ohio fair whichs I never seen like that before it was a lot of thing and a lot of fun.
especially I saw a caw the one made by better it was amazing I was so glad I got a chance to see those amazing things.
Johannnes, your first paragraph has good information, but you need to write a lot more. 250-300 words.
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